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Amanda Talavera's avatar

Hey B! This is a great start to the story. You made me care about the main character and the conflict in this short chapter. That’s not easy to do. Well done! I look forward to reading more!

Kenn Reff's avatar

Great start to the story. I love a good cyberpunk vibe. Let’s roll!

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